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I like tops as tops & bottoms as bottoms... just a segregation 'perspective' I guess that I've always had... can't really fit it into stories like this, but the amount of content looks good for a lot of others to enjoy.

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Okay, I'll say more when I'm done, but gods damn you deserve an award for the best writer of text based games this year. I thought "stroking your meat missile with the deft and expertise somewhere between a well practiced prostitute and a seasoned stage magician" was good, but your "antici....pation" line was so well executed it's the only case I've seen that actually matches Rocky Horror Picture Show. I want your babies...

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I'm not actually sure if this is their writting or not, this seems to be a story on chyoa of the same name by Testytesterton, it's possible they are the same person, but I don't know.

Edit: I've just reread the intro spiel, and they say it isn't them. No shame for remaking the format, I just wish it was more obvious this is a reformat work.

It said the original was a different author but that more was being added, so I figured this was an actual rewrite.

I’m never gonna try to pretend that this is fully my work, Testy is a god among men for their writing. However, I have added a few things so far. My goal is to place an amazing story in a place where it’s more accessible and more people are exposed to it, and to finish up dead ends and uncompleted routes. Out of the 18 endings so far, at least 9 I created/completed for the current build. I just want the things that I work on to blend in with the original story so seamlessly, you wouldn’t even notice they were there. 


If I attempted a full rewrite, I believe it would become merely a pale imitation of the original work. No, better to let my work take the sidelines and let the true artist shine through.

I greatly appreciate that, frankly it's amazing how well it's looking so far, I just wish it was a bit more obvious. For example, on tfgames.com, the only word indicating this is contributed. This isn't a terrible crime against intellectual property or anything, but I do think a mention of Testy should be more visible then a page most people skim over.

good game so far but also question are there any endings where you don't get infected

yes, there are. they arent in the game yet but there most definitely are a few

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thats the plan for the future, i'm going to finish the story first though, what's currently there is only about 20% of the finished material, plus completing dead ends is a priority as well.

That's a good plan.